Our rough cut thriller: Final Seduction

This is our rough cut of the film final seduction that we are making. We recieved feedback from our teachers and we had agreed to change some of the scenes such as when the man is standing in the hallway waiting to answer the door. to make this scene more effective we decided to have the man walking up to the door once the woman had knocked on the door. We feel this is a better idea because it is as if the man is standing there knowing she is going to be knocking.